Feature Writing Process

1. A feature lede doesn't have the who, what, when, where, why, and how all in the first paragraph like a news lede does.
2. Who- 1
What-2
When-1
Where-1
Why-2
How-2
3. yes
4. no
5. Williams, people who saw him talk
6.  "My boss said to me: 'If you don't get him hired, you're fired.'"
7. 33
8. 758
9. They both talk about his unique voice and say "that voice"
10. to show how powerful his voice was
11. yes
12. yes
13. it added a visual so you could understand the story better
14. yes, it wouldn't be as strong
15. yes
16. He used quotes from Williams that were common phrases radio voices would say that helps you imagine what his voice sounded like.

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